5.10.11

Project Progress: edited poem

A maid pours wishful whiskey

Through hair tangled and tired

Envying the man in the dress

Full of the weary warmth

Of his babies and white fence


A dull copper bar flows between

The pretty man with his kind wife

And the runaway barmaid

Matching patience and hairstyles

Shyly watch the demons from the bank


Gravity lures dimming stars to a fold in the river

Where Hell breathes his metallic liquor

Knitting new law from sharpened nightmare

To swallow nature in a sack

And dress the meadow in pink

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